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Once Upon a Broken Heart by Stephanie Garber Review: Dark Fairytale Fantasy With Addictive Danger

Once Upon a Broken Heart is the first novel in Stephanie Garber's #1 New York Times bestselling series of the same name, published by Flatiron Books on September 28, 2021. It follows Evangeline Fox, a true believer in love and happy endings, who strikes a perilous bargain with the wicked Prince of Hearts — trading three kisses for his help stopping her beloved's wedding — only to discover that dealing with an immortal Fate carries consequences far darker than she imagined. Kirkus Reviews calls it "a lushly written story with an intriguing heart," and critical coverage praises Garber's "exquisitely imagined worldbuilding and her trademark heady romance," though Kirkus also notes that the fantasy world-building is unevenly developed and the writing can veer into the verbose. The series opener is designed to be accessible to readers new to Garber's Caraval universe while expanding it in significant new directions.

LuvemBooks Verdict

Best for

Readers aged 13–18 who love dark fairytale romance, morally ambiguous supernatural figures, and emotionally driven heroines — whether they're already fans of the Caraval trilogy or looking for a compelling entry point into Garber's world.

Worth it if

The dangerous-bargain premise, lush atmosphere, and an unpredictable plot centred on an immortal antihero are what you're there for — this delivers those in abundance.

Skip if

Readers who prize tightly constructed fantasy systems and restrained prose are likely to find Garber's maximalist, occasionally confusing prose style and haphazard world-building a persistent frustration.

Kirkus Reviews awarded the novel a starred verdict, praising its "well-rounded" themes of love, story, and belief and noting "welcome surprises" in the plot, while also flagging writing that "fluctuates from clever and original to overly verbose" and fantasy elements that are "haphazardly incorporated without enough time devoted to building a cohesive world." Book blog Bookish Wayfarer describes it as "a dazzling fantasy replete with intriguing characters, romance, and a captivating plot," and notes it can be enjoyed without prior knowledge of the Caraval trilogy.

A lushly written story with an intriguing heart.

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Sources: Kirkus Reviews, Bookish Wayfarer
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In This Review
  • What Works & What Doesn't
  • What the Book Is and What Happens
  • Significance and Place in the Genre
  • Strengths: Atmosphere, Theme, and Surprise
  • Limitations: Prose and World-Building Consistency
  • Who This Book Is For

What Works & What Doesn't

What Works
  • First novel in the #1 New York Times bestselling series, with a compelling dark-fairytale premise built around a dangerous bargain between Evangeline Fox and the immortal Prince of Hearts
  • Kirkus Reviews credits the novel with well-rounded themes — love, the power of story, family influence, and holding onto hope — and a plot with welcome surprises
  • Publishers Weekly praises Garber's 'exquisitely imagined worldbuilding and her trademark heady romance,' signaling strong genre craft
  • Structured around Evangeline's single point of view, which sustains suspense and mystery; accessible to readers new to the Caraval universe without prior knowledge of the trilogy
  • Expands the Caraval world into the previously unexplored mystical North, offering genuine new territory for existing fans of Garber's fiction
What Doesn't
  • Kirkus Reviews notes the writing fluctuates from clever to overly verbose and can be confusing in its layering of sensory details
  • Fantasy world-building is uneven — Kirkus identifies elements that are haphazardly incorporated without sufficient grounding, leaving the world feeling less than fully cohesive
  • The large supporting cast is intriguing but underdeveloped; Kirkus notes readers will wish more time had been spent with individual characters
  • Central human characters, including Evangeline, read as White per Kirkus, with broader diversity present among the world's fantasy races rather than the primary cast
Garber's series opener is an enchanting but uneven young adult fantasy that earns its devoted readership through atmosphere, premise, and a genuinely unpredictable plot — even as its world-building strains under the weight of its ambition.

What the Book Is and What Happens

Once Upon a Broken Heart by Stephanie Garber front cover
Once Upon a Broken Heart by Stephanie Garber front cover
Once Upon a Broken Heart centers on Evangeline Fox, a young woman whose lifelong faith in true love is shattered when Luc — the man she loves — announces he will marry her kind but distant stepsister, Marisol. Desperate and heartbroken, Evangeline turns not to friends or family but to the Prince of Hearts, one of the immortal beings known as Fates, a figure famed for his lethal kisses and his heart said to be waiting for revival by his one true love. The bargain they strike is deceptively simple on its surface: three kisses, given at times and places of the Prince of Hearts' choosing. What follows, as the publisher's synopsis makes clear, is a dark and magical journey in which Evangeline learns that the Prince of Hearts wants far more from her than she pledged — and that the outcome will be either "the greatest happily ever after, or the most exquisite tragedy." The novel is set partly in the mystical North, a region of Garber's broader Caraval universe steeped in fantastical creatures and lore that the earlier Caraval trilogy had only gestured toward.
the themes of love, the power of story, family influence, and holding onto belief are well rounded and add depth.

Significance and Place in the Genre

Garber arrives at this series already established as a #1 New York Times and internationally bestselling author, with her Caraval trilogy translated into more than thirty languages. Once Upon a Broken Heart opens a four-book series and represents a deliberate expansion of her fictional world into new territory. The novel engages directly with fairytale archetypes — the desperate bargain, the wicked immortal, the hopeful heroine — while filtering them through the dark-romantic register that defined Caraval. For the young adult fantasy-romance genre, the book's central proposition (what lengths will someone go to for a happily ever after?) positions it within a tradition of morally complex fairytale retellings, though it is an original story rather than a direct retelling of any single source tale. Blurb praise from fellow authors reflects the book's reception in its genre community: Isabel Ibañez, herself a #1 New York Times bestselling author, describes it as "edgy, dark, and gorgeously written," calling it "heart-pounding, fresh, and addictive."

Strengths: Atmosphere, Theme, and Surprise

Kirkus Reviews, in its starred-verdict notice, credits the novel with thematic substance, noting that "the themes of love, the power of story, family influence, and holding onto belief are well rounded and add depth." The concept of the Fates as a functioning religious system within the world is singled out as a source of genuine interest. The plot is noted by Kirkus to contain "welcome surprises," and the large supporting cast generates curiosity. Critical coverage, as cited by the publisher, highlights Garber's "exquisitely imagined worldbuilding and her trademark heady romance" as defining assets. The novel is also structured around a single point of view — Evangeline's — a choice that, as noted by the book blog Bookish Wayfarer, tightens narrative suspense and sustains mystery throughout. Importantly, the book is written to stand independently for readers who have not encountered the Caraval trilogy, making it a genuine entry point rather than a sequel-in-disguise.

Limitations: Prose and World-Building Consistency

Kirkus Reviews is frank about the book's weaknesses. The writing style, the review notes, "fluctuates from clever and original to overly verbose and often confusing in its jumble of senses." World-building is identified as the more structural concern: "other fantasy elements are haphazardly incorporated without enough time devoted to building a cohesive world." The large cast, while intriguing, is noted as underdeveloped — readers are left wanting more time with characters who are introduced but not fully explored. These are not fringe reader complaints but the considered judgment of a major review outlet. On representation, Kirkus observes that Evangeline and several other central characters read as White, with diversity present among the fantasy races of the world rather than in the central human cast, though Luc is described as having brown skin.

Who This Book Is For

Flatiron Books targets the novel at readers aged 13–18, and the Amazon grade-level designation of grades 7–9 reflects its positioning within the younger end of young adult fiction. Readers drawn to fairytale-inflected fantasy with a dark-romantic core, morally ambiguous supernatural figures, and an emotionally driven heroine will find the book engineered precisely for their tastes. Those who prioritize tightly constructed fantasy systems and restrained prose may find Garber's maximalist approach frustrating. For readers already fond of the Caraval series, the expansion into the North and the introduction of the Fates as foregrounded figures rather than background mythology offers substantive new territory. For newcomers, the book's self-contained accessibility makes it a viable starting point for one of young adult fantasy's most commercially successful ongoing series.

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