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Once Upon a Broken Heart by Stephanie Garber Review: Dark Fairytale Fantasy With Addictive Danger
Once Upon a Broken Heart is the first novel in Stephanie Garber's #1 New York Times bestselling series of the same name, published by Flatiron Books on September 28, 2021. It follows Evangeline Fox, a true believer in love and happy endings, who strikes a perilous bargain with the wicked Prince of Hearts — trading three kisses for his help stopping her beloved's wedding — only to discover that dealing with an immortal Fate carries consequences far darker than she imagined. Kirkus Reviews calls it "a lushly written story with an intriguing heart," and critical coverage praises Garber's "exquisitely imagined worldbuilding and her trademark heady romance," though Kirkus also notes that the fantasy world-building is unevenly developed and the writing can veer into the verbose. The series opener is designed to be accessible to readers new to Garber's Caraval universe while expanding it in significant new directions.
LuvemBooks Verdict
Best for
Readers aged 13–18 who love dark fairytale romance, morally ambiguous supernatural figures, and emotionally driven heroines — whether they're already fans of the Caraval trilogy or looking for a compelling entry point into Garber's world.
Worth it if
The dangerous-bargain premise, lush atmosphere, and an unpredictable plot centred on an immortal antihero are what you're there for — this delivers those in abundance.
Skip if
Readers who prize tightly constructed fantasy systems and restrained prose are likely to find Garber's maximalist, occasionally confusing prose style and haphazard world-building a persistent frustration.
What readers & critics say
Kirkus Reviews awarded the novel a starred verdict, praising its "well-rounded" themes of love, story, and belief and noting "welcome surprises" in the plot, while also flagging writing that "fluctuates from clever and original to overly verbose" and fantasy elements that are "haphazardly incorporated without enough time devoted to building a cohesive world." Book blog Bookish Wayfarer describes it as "a dazzling fantasy replete with intriguing characters, romance, and a captivating plot," and notes it can be enjoyed without prior knowledge of the Caraval trilogy.
“A lushly written story with an intriguing heart.”
— Kirkus ReviewsLook inside the book
Preview the actual pages, via Google BooksIn This Review
- What Works & What Doesn't
- What the Book Is and What Happens
- Significance and Place in the Genre
- Strengths: Atmosphere, Theme, and Surprise
- Limitations: Prose and World-Building Consistency
- Who This Book Is For
What Works & What Doesn't
What Works
- First novel in the #1 New York Times bestselling series, with a compelling dark-fairytale premise built around a dangerous bargain between Evangeline Fox and the immortal Prince of Hearts
- Kirkus Reviews credits the novel with well-rounded themes — love, the power of story, family influence, and holding onto hope — and a plot with welcome surprises
- Publishers Weekly praises Garber's 'exquisitely imagined worldbuilding and her trademark heady romance,' signaling strong genre craft
- Structured around Evangeline's single point of view, which sustains suspense and mystery; accessible to readers new to the Caraval universe without prior knowledge of the trilogy
- Expands the Caraval world into the previously unexplored mystical North, offering genuine new territory for existing fans of Garber's fiction
What Doesn't
- Kirkus Reviews notes the writing fluctuates from clever to overly verbose and can be confusing in its layering of sensory details
- Fantasy world-building is uneven — Kirkus identifies elements that are haphazardly incorporated without sufficient grounding, leaving the world feeling less than fully cohesive
- The large supporting cast is intriguing but underdeveloped; Kirkus notes readers will wish more time had been spent with individual characters
- Central human characters, including Evangeline, read as White per Kirkus, with broader diversity present among the world's fantasy races rather than the primary cast
What the Book Is and What Happens

Significance and Place in the Genre
Strengths: Atmosphere, Theme, and Surprise
Limitations: Prose and World-Building Consistency
Who This Book Is For
Frequently Asked Questions
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