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The Serpent and the Wings of Night

The Serpent and the Wings of Night by Carissa Broadbent Review: Vampire Tournament Romantasy

Carissa Broadbent's The Serpent and the Wings of Night opens the Crowns of Nyaxia series. Oraya, a human raised by the Nightborn vampire king, enters a deadly tournament and allies with a dangerous rival, Raihn. It is a dark, slow-burn romantasy for fans of ACOTAR.

Ages 16+graphic violence in a lethal tournament · bloodshed and killing

LuvemBooks Verdict

Best for

Romantasy readers who want a vampire tournament story with an enemies-to-lovers slow burn and don't mind a familiar, heavily signposted template.

Worth it if

Worth reading if you enjoy a high-stakes contest plot where the romance builds gradually, and you can accept that reviewers disagree on whether the middle holds up.

Skip if

Skip it if you want an original premise, lighter or lower-violence fantasy, or a standalone rather than the opening volume of a series.

Where reviewers agree and split

Readers rate it 4.5 on Amazon. The reviews we read that discuss it in depth split on some points:

Of the 2 reviews we read that discuss its pacing, 1 says it never drags, but 1 says it loses momentum after the opening.

  • Pacing

    1 says it never drags · 1 says it loses momentum after the opening

  • Characters

    1 loves the characters · 1 finds the characters bland

Pacing

Praise

“It never slows down or drags, despite the fact that it’s over 500 pages long.”

— Takes Two to Book Review · Book blog
Criticism

“It quickly loses momentum”

— Heavenly Bookish · Book blog

Characters

Praise

“I instantly fell for the characters.”

— Red Hawk Radio · Book blog
Criticism

“Struggles with bland characters and minimal worldbuilding.”

— Heavenly Bookish · Book blog
3 reviews weigh in (3 book blogs); counts are per topic. A review counts only where we can quote it.

Reader-review blogs are split: takestwotobookreview.com says it sped through the book and that it never slows down or drags, while fantasybookcafe.com found it uninteresting outside the beginning and ending, and heavenlybookish.be says it quickly loses momentum.

Sources: takestwotobookreview.com, fantasybookcafe.com, heavenlybookish.be
4.5from 165,527 Amazon ratings, as of Oct 2026— reader ratings, not a LuvemBooks score

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The Serpent and the Wings of Night opens the Crowns of Nyaxia series, pairing a human-raised heroine with a dangerous rival inside a vampire tournament. It is a heavy, slow-burn romantasy that works best for readers who like the tournament-and-rival template, with the caveat that reviewers split on pacing and character depth.
Is it worth reading?
It delivers if you want a tournament plot with a romance that builds gradually, and the intrigue and ending draw the most praise. The honest caveat is that reviewers disagree on the middle: one says it never drags despite its length, while another says it loses momentum after the opening. Characters split readers too, with some falling for them and others finding them bland.
Similar books
If you want to stay in Carissa Broadbent's world, the next steps are The Ashes and the Star-Cursed King, then Daughter of No Worlds. For other dark romantic fantasy with high stakes, try One Dark Window by Rachel Gillig, The Book of Azrael by Amber V. Nicole, or Once Upon a Broken Heart by Stephanie Garber. The publisher's own comparisons are The Hunger Games and A Court of Thorns and Roses, which show the shape of the book.
Who should read this?
Adult and older-teen romantasy readers who want vampires, court politics and a romance driven by rivalry. It suits people who enjoy a long build between the leads and are comfortable with a violent, high-stakes plot. Readers who dislike committing to a series should know this is only the first volume.
What age is it for?
This is best for adults and mature older teens, roughly 16 and up. The tournament setting involves violence and bloodshed, and the romance is billed as heart-wrenching and intense. It is not aimed at younger readers.
About Carissa Broadbent
Carissa Broadbent is the No. 1 New York Times and USA Today bestselling author behind the Crowns of Nyaxia series and a prominent name in romantasy. She began as a self-published author, selling books on Etsy, before moving to traditional publishing while keeping an independent side to her work.
How slow is the slow burn?
A BookPage blurb quoted on the publisher's page calls it an ultra-slow-burn romance, so expect the leads' relationship to develop across the long book rather than early on. The enemies-to-lovers tension between Oraya and Raihn is the engine, and it competes with the tournament for page space.
Is it a standalone?
No. It is Book 1 of Crowns of Nyaxia, and reviewers say the ending pushes readers into the sequel. Plan on continuing if you enjoy it.
How dark and violent is it?
Quite dark. The promotional language promises dark magic and bloodthirsty intrigue, and the plot is a lethal tournament with deadly stakes. Readers who prefer lighter or lower-violence fantasy are not the intended audience.
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Oraya, a human adopted by the Nightborn vampire king, enters a lethal contest against warriors from all three vampire houses and must ally with Raihn, a rival who is also her toughest competition. The book is the first in the Crowns of Nyaxia series and ends in a way that pushes readers toward the sequel.

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Carissa Broadbent's vampire romantasy sets a human-raised heroine into a lethal tournament and pairs her with a rival who may be her undoing; it leans on high stakes and heat, and reviewers disagree on whether the pacing holds up.
The Serpent and the Wings of Night (Crowns of Nyaxia Book 1) by Carissa Broadbent front cover
The Serpent and the Wings of Night (Crowns of Nyaxia Book 1) by Carissa Broadbent front cover

What the book is

The Serpent and the Wings of Night is the first book in the Crowns of Nyaxia series, a romantic fantasy about vampires, dark magic and court intrigue. Its heroine is Oraya, the adopted human daughter of the Nightborn vampire king, who has carved out a place for herself in a world built to kill her.
The plot is a competition. Oraya enters a deadly tournament against the most vicious warriors from all three vampire houses.
To survive it, she is forced into an alliance with a mysterious rival named Raihn, whom the publisher's copy describes as a ruthless vampire, an efficient killer and an enemy to her father's crown. He is also her greatest competition.

The pitch and its place in the genre

The publisher's jacket copy sells the book as "The Hunger Games meets vampires" and pitches it to readers of A Court of Thorns and Roses and From Blood and Ash. That positioning is marketing language, but it tells you the shape of the thing: a trial structure where only one competitor can win, wrapped in an enemies-to-lovers romance.
The book began life as an independently published Kindle title in August 2022 and was later picked up for wider release. Macmillan's page lists it as a Wall Street Journal bestseller in series form, and the retailer copy calls it an instant New York Times and USA Today bestseller.
Popsugar included the series among its best fantasy romance books, according to a quote on Macmillan's page.

What readers and reviewers point to

The praise in the record centres on the romance and the danger. A Bookpage blurb, quoted on Macmillan's page, describes the book as gripping fantasy romance with plenty of blood and intrigue.
Another quoted line calls it a heart-pounding, ultra-slow-burn romance, which tells prospective readers what pace to expect between the leads.
A reader-review site, Self Publishing Titans, singles out the plotting and the ending. Its reviewer says the finale surprised them and left them eager for the second book.
That is one reader's reaction rather than a consensus, but it matches the way the book's marketing leans on the tournament's high stakes and a single winner.

Where it may not land

This is a genre book that announces its influences, and readers wary of the ACOTAR and Hunger Games template may find the premise familiar. A deadly contest, a guarded heroine and a dangerous rival who becomes an ally is a well-worn structure, and the jacket copy itself leans on those comparisons rather than claiming a new one.
The tone is also deliberately heavy. The promotional language promises heart-wrenching romance, dark magic and bloodthirsty intrigue, so readers who prefer lighter or lower-violence fantasy are not the target audience.
The slow-burn romance means the central pairing develops across a long 504-page Kindle edition rather than immediately.

Who it is for

The book is built for readers who want vampire fantasy with a romance at its centre and a tournament driving the plot. Fans of the comparison titles named in the publisher's copy are the clearest match.
It is also the opening volume of a longer series, and it ends in a way that reviewers say pushes readers toward the next book, The Ashes and the Star-Cursed King. Anyone who dislikes starting a series should know this is Book 1 of Crowns of Nyaxia, not a standalone.

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Age & Reading Level

Recommended age

Ages 16+

Reading level

Older teens & adults

Heat level

Steamy · rated 3/5 spice by readers (open door), some say closer to 4

From how readers describe it, not our own reading.

Content to know about

graphic violence in a lethal tournament
bloodshed and killing
dark magic
coercive alliance between rivals
on-page sex scenes

Best for: Adults / mature 16+ — violence, bloodshed and an intense dark romance

Skip if you want lighter, lower-violence fantasy or a standalone story rather than the opening of a series

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