McCurdy's fiction debut tackles complex relationship dynamics with nuanced prose, though pacing issues and uncomfortable themes may limit its appeal to dedicated literary fiction readers.
What works
• Nuanced exploration of power dynamics and consent
• Strong character development that avoids simple moral judgments
• Authentic dialogue and precise prose style
• Timely themes handled with intelligence and empathy
• Successful transition from memoir to fiction writing
What doesn't
• Pacing falters in the middle section with repetitive scenes
• Uncomfortable subject matter without always clear narrative justification
• Ending may frustrate readers seeking more resolution
• Limited appeal beyond literary fiction enthusiasts
